"THE WAY OF THE FUTURE" edited

"THE WAY OF THE FUTURE"

"THE WAY TO THE FUTURE"[??..akak x sure apa yang awak nak maksudkn utk title ni..]

the words that can give a lots of meaning..

the words which give a lot of meanings..

when talk about an ambition,how much a way that i have to make and do it...
to make my dreams and my colourfull future become true.
i knows that i must be someone on somebody. i hope so...

when talking about my ambition,i realize how much i want to make and achieve it...
i want to make all my dreams and my colourful future becomes true.
i know i must be somebody.. i really hope so...

am i brave to catch what i was trying to chase, although i know that how long the time to get it!!
along my life,i was never be someone that can give the true success to my love person,umi...
i invoke to Allah that can give us some helps...aminnn


i'm not sure whether i am brave enough to achieve what i was trying to get or not..
i never know how long the time to get it!! [ni maksudnye the time is too long, till u never know]
in my life before this,i had never been someone who can give the true success to my beloved person,umi...
i invoke to Allah who can give us some helps...aminnn

notes:
1. try to look back and study the way u used word 'that'.. sometimes it is inappropriate to use 'that' instead of 'who' ... e.g: to Allah that can give us some helps

2. try to look back and study the way u used word 'how' ... i discovered u really like to use how much, how long, etc... the meaning is 'betapa' right..try to make the sentence to have 'betapa' meaning... e.g: apabila bercakap mengenai cita cita, saya sedar betapa saya sangat berharap saya dapat mencapai cita cita saya..

3. try to use simple words which can make the writing flows naturally..

^^ try more! aja aja!